Hellmouth

[druffine]

Posted the beginning of a fic called "Hellmouth" at my site. Spander of course.

Any opinions?

Comments

[taligator.livejournal.com]

Oh very nice! I like the strength of Xander. You can see the Xan-man is still there underneath all the practicality.

I feel sad for Spike, his situation and despondance but it'll be good in the long run.

And might I say, the part where Xander mentions the sensitivity of the fangs... that's just ripe for some smut.

Thanks for sharing and writing. I hop you do more with this, it's got a lot of potential.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I am really careful with this fic, I don't want to make it crappy, I am aware of the potential and I really like to explore the ..smut. hee.