Hellmouth

[druffine]

Posted the beginning of a fic called "Hellmouth" at my site. Spander of course.

Any opinions?

Comments

[jstabe.livejournal.com]

Very interesting beginning. Left me with about a zillion questions. Can't wait for more of this.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. I hope to write more soon.

[authoressnebula.livejournal.com]

Uh, yeah, how do I say this without sounding desperate:

GIVE ME MORE!!!!

....~_^

Wonderful sweetie, just wonderful. So terribly sorry about the exams *shudders*, and I hope you'll be able to update soon. Good luck on the tests!

~Nebula

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Oh oh I am blushing here. Thank you!

Thanks also for the luck on the exams. I hope I'll be able to write more soon.

Why oh why do I have to have a real life????

[dancetomato.livejournal.com]

I'm hooked already. The tenderness of the bouncer, the motherliness of Mary, and the caring authority of Xander are believable. Plus you've so made me want to give TLC to Spike. Can't wait for more!

Will you be posting here to let us know when you update?

[druffine.livejournal.com]

I am glad the fic stays in the realm of credibility.
Thank you.

I'll post here if I have more but don't expect too much too soon. Sorry, in the middle of exams.

[dragonclaw21974.livejournal.com]

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Hm.. lol. I am not absolutely sure where I will go with this eiter but I'll go with it somewhere...

Thank you.

[piratepurple.livejournal.com]

Oooh! Awesome beginning, hunny! Can't wait to see more! I'm very exclaimy today!

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Exclaim right away! And one more! ! Thank you sweety, you're opinion means a lot to me!

HUGS!!!

[taligator.livejournal.com]

Oh very nice! I like the strength of Xander. You can see the Xan-man is still there underneath all the practicality.

I feel sad for Spike, his situation and despondance but it'll be good in the long run.

And might I say, the part where Xander mentions the sensitivity of the fangs... that's just ripe for some smut.

Thanks for sharing and writing. I hop you do more with this, it's got a lot of potential.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I am really careful with this fic, I don't want to make it crappy, I am aware of the potential and I really like to explore the ..smut. hee.

[sufie58.livejournal.com]

Great start - really looking forward to the next bit. Thank you.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

It still feels weird if someone says thanks for writing but it feels pretty good to be appreciated. Thank you for reading and telling me your opinion. I hope there will be more soon. *hate exams*

[twilightsfic.livejournal.com]

Interesting start. Really well written, I'm looking forward to more. I've seen several Spike or Xander working in a brothel sort of storylines, I have mixed feelings about them. I'll be interested to see how this one works out.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Ooooooh *blushing* over the well written. Thank you - biggest compliment you can make me. Thank you.

If you don't like what I may write in the future of if you have things you won't like to read or want to read, write me an email to druffine@gmx.de and I can see what I can do.

[ryuze.livejournal.com]

I went, I read, I liked... now I have to wait for more.
also still waiting for more 3 inches tall....