FIC: Sun - S/X - NC-17

[druffine]

Title: SUN
Pairing: S/X
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: none, AU in Season 4 BtVS
Warnings: graphic gay sex – duh!
Disclaimer: plot is mine, boys are not *cries*
Parts: 4 (3.512 words)

Thanks so much to joolzmp7 for beta'ing.


Thanks to everyone who took the time to comment! You made me very happy!


( Part 1 ) --- ( Part 2 ) --- ( Part 3 ) ---




Part 4/4

Third Person’s POV
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With practiced ease Xander got a huge drop of lube on his fingers. He grabbed Spike by the hair in his neck, pulled him into a kiss. The vampire’s moan was muffled against the youth's mouth when he felt the hot wet fingers slide down his buttocks.
Slowly Xander rubs just the beginning of the cleft, teasing. Spike feels the drop of lube slide down between his cheeks till it wets his opening. The rubs the dark haired man makes get longer until he reaches the puckered flesh and ... Spike’s hips jerk forward, shying away from the unfamiliar *warm* finger there.
"Ssshh..." Xander tries to calm the gasping blond, sucking the soft bottom lip in his mouth.
His finger never leaves the position over the clenched hole, just stays there, and lets Spike get used to the touch.
Only a few seconds go by until Xander feels Spike relax and he starts to caress his goal. His tongue mirrors the movement of his digit; licking circles on Spike’s half closed lips, dipping in between lightly, with every dip a little bit deeper.

Spike moans, stunned by the experience and tenderness Xander shows. He never thought of Xander as a gentle lover, at ease with a man in his bed. He hadn’t dared to hope for it.
A warm hand plays in his hair; warm lips are worshipping his mouth and one warm wet finger tip… oh so gently slides inside him, so slowly, careful not to hurt him.
Moaning, Spike pushes down on the digit, needing more of it inside him. Xander lets him go at his own pace, just giving enough resistance for the blond to work himself completely on it. Xander loves the intimacy of this, watching Spike’s eyelids flutter, when he clenches around the second knuckle, then relaxes and gives way for all of it.

“Want more?” Xander whispers against Spike’s lip, biting the addicting lower lip playfully.
“Morrrrre.” The vampire purrs, sucking Xander’s tongue inside his mouth with force, making clear, how much he *needs* more. Taking the hint, one more of Xander’s fingers joins the first. Whimpering, the blonde squirms higher on the hot body until his nipple is over the warm mouth, which latches onto the hard nub immediately.

After that everything seems to spin out of control, frantically Xander works his finger deeply in Spike’s tight hole. The blond trembles over him, moaning and crying out for more. Forcefully Xander pushes Spike on his back, rolls onto him and makes Spike mewl with the weight pressing down on him. Panting and hectically searching for the lube, finding it, squeezing out too much, smearing it over his hard cock, Spike’s leaking dick, when he gives it some strokes and even more over and in the tight hole, greedily grasping for his by now three fingers. Hard kisses, feverishly clashing tongues and bumping teeth but who cares? Not these two men lost in sensations.
Grunting Spike lifts up his legs, crosses the ankles behind Xander’s back, moving so that Xander’s hard dick rests in between his cleft, the hot tip pressed against his opening. He can’t wait anymore, he has to feel the heat of his partner inside him. NOW.

But Xander slows down everything; even the world seems to hold its breath.

Elbows resting besides Spike’s shoulders, both hands entwined with the blond hair, holding Spike’s head back, making him look in his eyes while he slides inside him inch by inch. Half way sheathed in that incredible tightness Xander stops, takes deep, deep breaths, desperately grasping for control.
“How long?” He gasps out. Hearing Xander’s voice rough like this, the warm breath puffing over his face, the cock head pressing firmly against his prostate, nearly does Spike in. He arches his back, wants so bad to be completely filled by this searing hotness. “Over eighty ye…” Crying out when Xander’s hips jerk forward, Xander’s balls hitting his bottom, finally he has the whole thick cock inside him as deep as it can go and all movement stops.

“Sorrysorry just couldn’t…” “Alrightalrightalright, feels so good…” Spike pants out, lust darkened gazes locked for several moments until… the first light thrust.

Spike groans when he feels the hard length move inside him. Everything feels new. Nothing is like he remembers it. The cock inside him is hot, pulsating and throbbing with blood. He panics when he feels only the head of Xander’s cock inside him and clenches down, hard, desperate to hold the searing hot meat inside him. Xander screams and shoves forward again, deeply embedding his shaft inside the slim blond. “Don’tdon’tdon’tdon’t” he chants and Spike relaxes his ring of muscles, letting the pressure on the thick cock subside.
“God, you’re tight.” He whispers and opens his eyes again to look in Spike’s face. Wide blue eyes stare up in to his, raw emotions laid open. Spike blinks very slowly and then moves his hips.
“Ready for more?” Xander asks with a light grin and Spike crashes his mouth to his.
Taking this as a signal, Xander moves. Pulling his cock out until only the head stays inside. Pushing back until Spike feels filled completely. Long, slow strokes, hitting Spike’s prostate with nearly every deep shove.

They are both moaning, grunting, begging for more and they know they won’t last long. Both are desperate to hold back and to let go at the same time. “Harder!” Spike eventually cries out and Xander increases the speed of his thrust. Not enough, not enough.

Losing his grip on Spike’s hair, Xander leans back and grabs Spike under his knees, spreading him wide open, holding his legs up and bending the blond even more. Just the right angle to truly fuck him hard and fast.

Pounding into Spike without mercy. Getting faster with every shove. Getting deeper than ever before into the clenching tightness. Out of breath and only seconds away from coming he orders Spike to “Work yourself!”. Immediately the blond closes his long fingers around his hard length and starts to pump it furiously.

“Cum for me, baby, cum for me.” Xander grits out, fighting a losing battle of fulfilled lust. And Spike arches his back and howls when white creamy ropes of cum shoot from his cock onto his chest. The look of absolute bliss and the fluttering hole around his straining cock are too much for Xander and he cums. Hard. Hips jerking against Spike’s ass with every wave of his climax. Spike whimpers hoarse “Yeah, yeah.” ’s when he feels Xander’s warm cum spurt against his inner walls.

Long moments pass until the dark haired man lets himself collapse onto the grinning blonde, burying his face in the pale cool neck.

“Mhmm, that’s good. All cool.” He murmurs against the soft skin, sending shivers through Spike’s body. “I’ll just stay here.”

Spike’s hands close around the broader frame and he places tiny kisses against Xander’s ear.
“Still cold?” He hears the youth mumble sleepily and warm lips ghost over the skin on his shoulder.
“No, all good now. Feel all warmed up inside.” Spike answers with a light chuckle, but both of them know that he does not mean the cum or the still embedded cock.

*** *** ***

Okay, truth time: This was my first graphic slash sex scene and it took me over two weeks to write it. I nearly went nuts. My cats were scared of me coz of the sounds I made and the positions I tried out. Bummer, if you don’t have someone to ask or to try it out with.

One question though: Do men mewl or don’t they? heehee



Again thank you for any comments I might get, even if there is no follow up to this Part.

Do you want me to bring my other fics to lj too?

Comments

[thewatch.livejournal.com]

Wow, if that was your first graphic sex scene I can't wait to see what you do with more practice. It was very hot and really, really good. I reckon men do mewl.

I'd love to read more in this series if you're gonna write it and I'd certainly be happy to read any other fic you'd like to post.

Go for it.

[vampsarecool.livejournal.com]

first wow..just fucking wow that was hot. Next:
Do you want me to bring my other fics to lj too?

HELL YES!!!

[piratepurple.livejournal.com]

Do you want me to bring my other fics to lj too?

PLEASE!!

And men mewl. Indeed they do.

[joolzmp7.livejournal.com]

Are you kidding!! Of course you have to bring your other fics on here, so we can indulge ourselves. After all, you know what they say: "A Dru fic a day, keeps the boredom away." lol.

And love the whole sex scene - you did brilliantly, (especially the mewling!!) and it was sooooo hot.

More please.

Joolz

[amejisuto.livejournal.com]

Wow, that was soo good. I kinda want a morning after!

Yes bring your other stuff to LJ, that one fic on AFF with Spike and Xander I'm just loving it. You know the one, where Buffy is kinda off her rocker. I don't want to give any spoilers.

Re: woah

[dancingdragon3.livejournal.com]

Oh my God! That was so effin' hot. Hot as Hell! Mmmmmmm. I mean really *wiggle wiggle*. Thanks.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Yes, that really was my first graphic sex scene,
I just had to write this short pwp to find out if I was able to do it...
I didn't plan on a sequel and I have two other big WiPs to work on...
*shrugs and thinks about it* lol.

Thank you so much for your comment.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Thank you thank you...

*thinks about bringing her fics her*

[druffine.livejournal.com]

heehee... they mewl, of course they do!
Pft. Some male readers/feedbacker just have no idea. *nods*

*thinks about bringing my other fics here*

[druffine.livejournal.com]

This is my beta Joolz! *squeals*

Babe, thank you so much for being there for me and my fics,
and thank you for making sense of my non-native English and
just generally listening to my babbling!

I love you!

[druffine.livejournal.com]

and...

Your story A Vampire's Eye View is wonderful!

You know I don't lie about that kind of things.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Oh I 'm glad nobody reads my comments and runs off to AFF to read it...

Yeah, I'm thinking about bringing that one here. Maybe *shrugs*

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Ooooh thank you!!!
I am glad you liked it and got all... *wiggly*.
LOL.

[amejisuto.livejournal.com]

I just can't wait to read the next bit! Family reunion time! Yes!

[paperk8.livejournal.com]

Men totally mewl.
*grins and winks*
And so did I, at this hotness.
Loverly.
I would love to see a follow up. *votes*
Bring on the fic.

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Maybe I write a follow up sometime in the future... yeah, there are already plotbunnies in my head, having hot furry sex and generally distracting me from my two big WiPs.

Glad you mewled...
males keep telling me they don't mewl at all... Pfft!
Thank you.

[vampirellabites.livejournal.com]

::shiver::

Damn, woman. This fic will be the death of me if I read it one more time...but what a way to go. Positively scrumptious, it is. I would like to have it's babies. And trust me, I'll find a way. ::wink::

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Please, please don't read it again if it'll kill you!

[crazydiamondsue.livejournal.com]

Saw "Rain" posted on bloodclaim and went off to read "Sun" first. Loved it! Loved Spike with his need for warmth and the "where'd you get those bottles - where'd you get those abs" bit was brilliant. Verrrry impressive first sex scene, too, btw. Okay, off to read "Rain."

[jstabe.livejournal.com]

Me too! Loved this story. Gotta go read some more.

[fanbot.livejournal.com]

So hot! Damn! I have to go read "Rain" now, then hope for "Blizzard" "Hail" "Drizzle" and "Fog"!
Thank you for sharing and please... KEEP WRITING!
I'm going to point this one out to people on my S/X Yahoo group!

Sun

[littletri.livejournal.com]

I loved this fic. And I had to laugh at the last comment. I'm totally in agreement though. I want more, more, more! This was excellent!

[hammiepoo.livejournal.com]

OMG. Finally found you over here in lj land...lol Late fb, I know, but this is the hottest Spander - hell, it's the hottest fic period that I've read in a looong time....

Still can't quite believe this was your first attempt at teh pr0n *is insanely jealous*

[druffine.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. *blushes*

Yes, this was really my first pr0n... It took me weeks to write it and I went nearly insaaaaane with it between blushing furiously and doubting myself.

Thank you for the comment, it makes me unbelieveable happy to see that people still read it, remember it and even tell me. *hugs*

(Friended you - hope you don't mind.)